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Angels On The Sideline by =sikali:iconsikali:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Expressive

©2007-2009 =sikali
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Right in Two (Tool)

last one for today i think. my fav one. pretty similar to my older pic "30 feet above" i think? prefer this one tho (altthough it's not really comparable since they have different themes. eh? hm) oh well.

sira.artilogia.net

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Angels on the sideline,
Puzzled and amused.
Why did Father give these humans free will?
Now they're all confused.

Don't these talking monkeys know that
Eden has enough to go around?
Plenty in this holy garden, silly monkeys,
Where there's one you're bound to divide it.
Right in two.

Angels on the sideline,
Baffled and confused.
Father blessed them all with reason.
And this is what they choose.
And this is what they choose...

Monkey killing monkey killing monkey
Over pieces of the ground.
Silly monkeys give them thumbs,
They forge a blade,
And where there's one
they're bound to divide it,
Right in two.
Right in two.

Monkey killing monkey killing monkey.
Over pieces of the ground.
Silly monkeys give them thumbs.
They make a club.
And beat their brother, down.
How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

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~vehemencia Feb 26, 2007, 8:03:11 AM
its very very beautiful work ! hope to see more of ur works like this.

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~locust-studio~ ranendra mali [link]
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=Vrykon Feb 26, 2007, 8:07:44 AM
The only thing that I don't like (I'm sorry, I know crits from me are unusual so don't take this like it's more than just a statement) is that the framing cuts off just above her eye. That breaks up everything else in the composition. If it is cropped down to this from a pic that had more at the top, I think it would be better to crop it differently. Most of the lines in this picture focus attention around her neck. Pulling the attention toward the eye is then mostly accomplished by the fact that it seems as if the picture was cut off at the wrong place. It pulls back and forth and I finally decide to look at the eye because there is a problem with the composition instead of it being an attraction to that point.

Everything else about this picture I like very much. Especially some similarity to 30 Feet Above. Of course, you can't really compare those as photos. I prefer 30 Feet Above for what it is and it is incredible. I think I prefer this concept. Particularly, I like the connection to Right In Two. I think you pulled that off really well. :] I also will add... that I oddly find the conflict in the composition fitting for connecting with that song. In that way, even what annoys me there also makes the picture work. *lol* Anyway, I do think it is a great shot. ^^

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=sikali Feb 26, 2007, 9:00:29 AM
uh it's not cropped, the framing was intention, i think its more interesting than the common way of framing *shrugs* :)
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~Madreblu Feb 26, 2007, 9:01:04 AM
Wonderful song and pic :clap:

tool :horns:

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- Mi scuso per il disordine morale... -

- I'm sorry for the moral disorder... -
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~the-psycrothic Feb 26, 2007, 9:28:59 AM
i wonder . . . how you make tone like this . . . care to tell ??? :)

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i jump , i fall , i learn .
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=Vrykon Feb 26, 2007, 10:22:19 AM
Okay, thank you for answering.
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~n0v1ce Feb 26, 2007, 3:17:10 PM
Ich bin sprachlos. Hast du fein gemacht =)
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